The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

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The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

This bar chart illustrates the amount that two countries used some product in 2010. Cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras are the consumer goods that uses to describe the trend. This information measured in pounds sterling.

Overall, the UK spent more money for usage of consumer goods compared to France. Both of them they mostly used money to cars expense. Perfume was the less expenditure to British and for France they spent a little cost for cameras.

In terms of cars, UK cost 450.000 pounds sterling and france spend less 50.000 pounds sterling. UK slightly was able to control their money for computer, where was France cost more money. To increase British knowledge, they prefer to read books. More than 400.000 pounds sterling expenditure for UK was spent to books. On the other hand, France only used 300.000 pounds sterling cash. France cost 150.000 pounds sterling for camera and UK cost more, it was more than 350.000 pounds sterling. For fragrance, UK cost less than France.

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Average: 7.8 (170 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04819277108 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26547676252 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1355165343 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.4615384615 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7692307692 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100456859702 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448653111949 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734736454127 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111165749658 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944783796487 0.0819641961636 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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