The bar chart illustrates how much France and UK's consumer had spent on different goods in 2010. These goods were cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras.
In the first glance, it was noticeable that most of the consumer in France and the UK spent a lot on having cars, which were 400,000 pounds and 450,000 pounds respectively. Additionally, both electronic devices, computers and cameras, were popular in the UK, but the consumer in France had the least interest in cameras. The expenditure on computers in both countries was almost the same, it was only around 30,000 pounds difference. However, the spending on cameras had a huge difference between these two countries, which was 210,000 in different.
As can be seen, citizens in the UK had more interest to spend on books than in France. 400,000 pounds had been spent on books from the UK consumer and 300,000 pounds had been spent from people in France. Perfume, on the other hand, was the least spending in the UK, which was only approximately 140,000 pounds.
To sum up, having own transportation was the top priority in both countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98924731183 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69433701674 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8408819589 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120591326289 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540554110868 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650996803727 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817152886222 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846564258283 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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