The bar chart depicts that information about the attendance of people at hospital emergency care department in Northern irland by 6 age groups and tbe period taken into consideration is december 2016 to december 2017.
A glance at picture apparently delineates that above 75 age group mostly visited at hospital and lower level of children went to hospital of age group 5 to 15.
Moving into details, the age group 16 to 14 and 45 to 64, In december 2016, around 30thousands population attended at emergency department and In december 2017, the ratio inclined slightly which was more than 30,000 population .coming towards age category of 5 to 15, In december 2016,the population was about 20,000 and In year 2017,there was no any significant changes occured.
Moving into rest of details,the childrens under 5, In year december 2016, more than 50 thousands population of childrens went to hospital. However, In year 2017,the ratio went up and reached at 55,000 whereas the masses above than 60,000 visited to emergency care department in 2016 and In year 2017,the figures grew which was 65,000 population present at moment on the other hand, the age group 65 to 74 , In year 2016 and 2017, only 25,000 attended at hospital.
- The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The diagram below shows the production and processing of milk and dairy products for commercial sale Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age group 5 to 15. Moving into details, the age group 16 to 14 and 45 to 64, In ...
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Suggestion: .
...ly which was more than 30,000 population .coming towards age category of 5 to 15, ...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...about 20,000 and In year 2017,there was no any significant changes occured. Movin...
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Suggestion: , the
...es occured. Moving into rest of details,the childrens under 5, In year december 201...
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Suggestion:
... was 65,000 population present at moment on the other hand, the age group 65 to 7...
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Suggestion: ,
...n the other hand, the age group 65 to 74 , In year 2016 and 2017, only 25,000 atte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99512195122 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72443861118 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541463414634 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 22.4926829268 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.071036988 43.030603864 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.8 112.824112599 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 22.9334400587 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432042820856 0.215688989381 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.258700057355 0.103423049105 250% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141757559479 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305953322189 0.15604864568 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121735429713 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.2329268293 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.61 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.9970731707 167% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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