The provided bar chart represents the frequency of eating in fast-food restaurants from 2003 and 2013.
At the first glance at the chart, it is apparent that the highest percentage of people visited once a week or once or twice a month over the whole period. In 2003, almost a his of population visited fast-food restaurants only once a week. Meanwhile, slightly fewer number of people ate there up to twice a month. By contract, only 5% of people never had had a meal at fast-food restaurant.
Considering 2006, there were inconsiderably more visitors who ate junk-food weekly than in 2003. Similarly, higher percentage of people used to eat out several times a week, reaching nearly 20%. Over the 10-year period, less ratio of people never ate or ate every day in fast-food restaurant. By the end of 2013, roughly a third of population in USA preferred eating at least once a month.
Overall, there were insignificant changes in how frequently people ate in fast-food restaurants during 2003-2013.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a hi' or simply 'his'?
Suggestion: a hi; his
... over the whole period. In 2003, almost a his of population visited fast-food restaur...
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Line 2, column 171, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'his'?
Suggestion: a; his
... over the whole period. In 2003, almost a his of population visited fast-food restaur...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...h. By contract, only 5% of people never had had a meal at fast-food restaurant. Consid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, third, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97023809524 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8663480186 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.716583525 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257192550524 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114852892082 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769104808843 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192770364191 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591783712476 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.