The line graph provides information about the percentage of unemployment in the United States and Japan during the period from 1993 to 1999.
The graph consists of upward and downward trends. The unemployment degree in the US showed a steady and fluctuated decline, while the percentage of work force in Japan experienced an upward pattern.
At the beginning of the unemployment vates of the USA and Japan were nearly 7% and 2,5% the extent of unemployment increased slightly all over the period, but in March 1996 there was a significant drop. After that it continued its unstable rise and steadily exceeded the vate of the US between March 98 and March 99. On the meantime, unemployment percentage of the United States was fulling fitfully, until stabilized a little from the March of 95. However, in recent year, indicators of both trends became slightly identical and reached 5%.
The number of unemployed people is unstable in present days and it was levelling off during the period.
- The pie chart below show the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990.Causes of land degradation by region 11
- Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world To what extent do you share their optimism What changes would you like to see in the new century 69
- The graph shows the change of average salaries in various spheres of employment in the US over a period of 40 years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons 84
- To some people, studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it’s important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history? 56
- Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth which can cause tooth decay High acid levels are measured by low pH values
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...consists of upward and downward trends. The unemployment degree in the US showed a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02424242424 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77423539049 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0587386877 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245689027664 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962971363722 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631067787394 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130705083219 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638215550435 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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