The bar graph gives details bout the challenges faced by the people in three different age groups(18-34,35-54,over 55), while they go to stay in foreign nations.
Overall, a major proportion of people who aged above 55 are comfortable with using local language and this the highest percentage among the three age groups, while people who aged between 18 to 24 are smarter than other age groups in finding a place for live and making new friends, they have the highest proportions in both.
In terms of, learning the local language, old age people are better than the other groups around a half (54%), of the total people in this group can learn foreign language easily ,whereas this is only 29% in 18 to 24 and 35% in 35 to 54 age groups.
When assess the capabilities of finding a shelter to live, people aged from 18 to 34 have the highest proportions in these two categories 40% and 46%. This follows 35 to 54 age group with 39% and 36%. The old age people have the least proportions in both activities, accounted for 22% and 23% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable using'.
Suggestion: comfortable using
...portion of people who aged above 55 are comfortable with using local language and this the highest per...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ave the highest proportions in both. In terms of, learning the local language...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... group can learn foreign language easily ,whereas this is only 29% in 18 to 24 and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61497326203 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74791392025 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.5127369797 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142899210846 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769239513825 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519666079281 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100236644687 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388235942648 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.