Some parents prefer to teach their children by themselves in home. This trend has some benefits as well as disadvantages. However I believe the detrimental effects are more comparing to the benefits.
To begin with, some parents do not like to send their children school because of two main reasons. First and foremost,they are worried about the safety of the children . Nowadays the number child abduction cases are increased and at least one case of child abduction will be there in every day news paper. By seeing these news they think that it is better to educate the children in the home itself. Another point is, sexual abuse by teachers and elders outside the home. Many incidents have been recorded, in which teachers and other people sexually assaulted children , while they are on the way to school or at the school. This also a important reason, why some parents compelled to keep their children in the home.
On the other hand, there are several disadvantages for this trend. First of all, some parents are not well educated in every subjects . In school there are specialized teachers for each and every subject and they can clarify any doubts of the students, no matter how complex it is. For instance, a father who is a accountant by profession can teach his child mathematics .However he may not have any idea about the subjects such as history and geography. Secondly, school is a place where children learn social and ethical values. The students go to school will learn how to mingle with others and respect all religions. On the contrary, some parents have extreme religious views and this infect their children as well if they do not go to school.
To conclude,I strongly believe children should be sent to school to acquire knowledge and other qualities. Teaching by parents in the home must not encourage by governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, at least, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88535031847 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55368962345 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6036866464 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7368421053 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15789473684 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340656462859 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104074661711 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801214507603 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196849408663 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728194814154 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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