The diagram depicts the changes in average house prices in various cities from 1990 to 2002 in compering with the figure in 1989. In general, spending for housing varied significantly.
As can be seen from the bar chart, there were two cities that have increasing in house prices, that were Madrid (Spain) and Frankfurt (Germany). In comparing with the average of period 1990-1995, while the figure of Madrid continued to grow in the period 1996-2002, Frankfurt experimented a slight drop. Furthermore, Tokyo's residents spent less for housing fee than in 1989, for example for the period from 1990 to 1995, the consumption fell by 7% and for the period 1996-2002 there was a decreasing of 5%.
On the other hand, New York (USA) and London (UK) fluctuated between these time. An instance illustrated the fact was that the number of New York, after decreased significantly by 5% from 1990 to 1995, it grew sharply from 1996 to 2002 by 5%. It mean the gap between the two periods was 10%. However, the most considerable number was belong to London by -7% for 1990-1995 and +13% for 1996-2002.
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence? 78
- Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion. 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 73
- TOPIC: Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions? 84
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individuals well-being.What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction?How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'means'?
Suggestion: means
...rew sharply from 1996 to 2002 by 5%. It mean the gap between the two periods was 10%...
^^^^
Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...wever, the most considerable number was belong to London by -7% for 1990-1995 and +13%...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, while, for example, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6290915095 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.537864306 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.111111111 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202122018575 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937978008208 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961166714995 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175666383829 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110042245566 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.