The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. (Sample answer 1)

The bar chart has shown us detailed information about the general problems of immigrants in different ages.

For the young adults and thirties aged 18-34, they consider social problems, for instance, making friends is their most difficulty for them to blend into the local society as nearly 56% people of this age has reported so. The social problem is relieved as they are ageing, people aged 35-54 experienced a lot less pressure on it, as its percentage has dropped to approximately 36% and in group over 55 has dropped to slightly above 20%.

Following by the housing problem by 40% and the same situation persists when people aged 35-54 and finally it witnesses a great relief on this among people over 55.

As people aged 18-34 are mostly in excellent condition of studying, learning the local language seems relatively easier for them which has represented 30% on the chart. But for the more aged people, mastering a new language is increasingly difficult for them. Among people aged 35-54, about 35% of them find it difficult, while group over 55, regarding this as the major difficulty for them.

To sum up, by people ageing, their income is gradually increasing, but in the meantime, the studying ability also impaired along with the process.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, regarding, so, while, for instance, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99526066351 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56630585529 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611374407583 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6933561883 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138831468782 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691962630833 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499329553722 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912751898569 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048726349699 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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