the chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000
The chart below illustrates the amount of man and woman took part in fitness activities from 1970 to 2000.
It is clear that while the number of female members increased, the opposite was true for the male attendant in fitness club during the given period. It is also notable that 1995 recorded the highest membership of both genders with 5000 for female and nearly 300 for male.
As can be seen from the chart, in 1970 their was nearly 200 male members who became fitness member, while there were only 1000 members for female. After 5 years, there was a sharp increase in the number of men join in fitness club nearly double to the female members. The next 10 years witnessed a slowly decline in the number of male member who taking part in club, falling to 1900 in 1980 before rise up to 2900 members in 1985.
Look at the chart in more detail, in 1990 the number of female had a slight fall to 2100 equal with the members of male. Over the next 5 years both male and female fitness club members reached the pek before declining significantly during the end og period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... recorded the highest membership of both genders with 5000 for female and nearly ...
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Message: You used an adverb ('slowly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...e members. The next 10 years witnessed a slowly decline in the number of male member who taking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4923857868 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10875676903 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553299492386 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.3561048337 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.625 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286802262609 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134224193761 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655053396654 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194272159377 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544331547796 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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