the chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparissons where relevant.
The bar chart compere the data of fitness membership from males and females between 1970 and 2000. Overall, the amount of fitness membership followed this program was highest in 1995 of the man. And the lowest happened in two years, first in 1970 of the female and the second in 2000 of the male the both had same data.
With regards to the interested person to register became fitness member started in 1970 had 1000 members of women, it was fewer than man had 2000 Members. Secondly, in 1975 had far different counts, man had 4000 members meanwhile women 2000 members. Thirdly, in 1980 there was almost 2000 members of the female while man was around 2500 members.In 1985 the firstly member of women higher than man had different number approximately 1000 from count almost 2000 of the man. Fourthly, in 1990 was similar between sexes, it was around 2000. Fifthly, in 1995 both was had the highest data but males had 5000 members and females had approximately 3000 members. The last, in 2000 happened grew up between sexes, women had 2000 members higher than man had 1000 members.
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
- the chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000.summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparissons where relevant. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75661375661 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23452126863 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465608465608 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7447202718 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158731559279 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103052023031 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937901818256 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187677282249 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986966722768 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.