the chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education

Essay topics:

the chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education

This bar chart depicts the number of female students per 100 male students in primary secondary and tertiary education.

According to what is shown, primary and secondary school illustrated similar behavior. The difference in female student decreased significantly in developing countries from 1990 to 1998.

In tertiary education developing countries had 75 women compared with 100 men in 1998 which before was the least figure in all school types 66. Developed nations kept the figure above the target in both years at 105 and 112 respectively.

To sum up, we could say that developing nations had more balance in gender distribution in primary education level, while developed one had overachieved the target in the tertiary sector.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, while, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43965517241 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84544141758 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9686367415 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153405016144 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685684253005 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494113339985 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896319239868 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396066945513 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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