The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the bar chart comparing three main airports in terms of the number of passengers carried over the 1995 - 2000 period.
As can be seen, both LaGuardia and Newark airports experienced an upward trend in the visitor quantity, while John F.Kennedy airport followed a fluctuating trend. Another point is that LaGuardia was by far the most popular airport at the end of the period.
In 1995, approximately 35 million passengers chose to traveled via LaGuardia, which is a more considerable number than other two airports. This airport continued to show its increasing popularity, when, despite being surpassed in 1997, it was still the most widely used airport at the end. The figure for LaGuardia instantly rose and peaked at nearly 69 million passengers in 2000, doubling its own figure at the beginning.
In marked contrast, Newark was the least chosen airport in 1995, which attracted only about 15 millions visitors. Despite being the least popular of three airport over the period, Newark still witnessed a surge in visitor number, which was doubled its starting quantity in 2000. John F.Kennedy airport was the second-popular eventually, although its figure fluctuated and reached a peak of nearly 45 million visitors, higher than that of LaGuardia in 1997.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kennedy
...d in the visitor quantity, while John F.Kennedy airport followed a fluctuating trend. A...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'airport' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'airports'.
Suggestion: airports
...espite being the least popular of three airport over the period, Newark still witnessed...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kennedy
...d its starting quantity in 2000. John F.Kennedy airport was the second-popular eventua...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tarting quantity in 2000. John F.Kennedy airport was the second-popular eventuall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24390243902 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71897099658 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3640165063 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 119.444444444 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152294176843 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746244457922 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597702810248 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116631787069 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654252550076 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.