The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

The bar graph elucidates the number of visitors at three distinguish airports in New York City from 1995 to 2000. While John F. Kennedy experienced a periodic fluctuation in the number of airport visitors, the other two airports received stable upward visitors.
LaGuardia had about 35 million airport passengers in 1995, whereas other two airports (John F. Kennedy and Newark) recorded of around 28 million and around 15 million passengers, respectively. After 1995, the passengers used for John F. Kennedy varied where it reached the highest passengers in 1997 of close to 50 million and by 2000 which similar number of passengers recorded again. Meanwhile, LaGuardia experienced a rapid popularity over passengers where it continuously rose to reach at its peak of nearly 70 million passengers, whereas Newark slowly grew to over 40 million passengers by 1998 and which number of passengers remained unchanged until 2000.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['whereas', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28025477707 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.0955414012739 0.116061578633 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636942675159 0.0759168565197 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382165605096 0.0366838410393 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0191082802548 0.0131127313244 146% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15923566879 0.155750635184 102% => OK
Participles: 0.00636942675159 0.0379272487307 17% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.85434882015 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254777070064 0.0210936926555 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0509554140127 0.0948980150116 54% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0254777070064 0.00967000014798 263% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 926.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.9 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34246575342 5.90752243213 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424657534247 0.337110787985 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328767123288 0.247514529752 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219178082192 0.171178102325 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157534246575 0.112407865282 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85434882015 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582191780822 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 48.3609997539 49.3433353143 98% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 29.2 23.0094962315 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4003610097 42.9750493124 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.2 135.714022679 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 23.0094962315 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.689975730869 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.84146341463 52% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 62.0767123288 47.7609492067 130% => OK
Elegance: 2.91666666667 2.94281807926 99% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312554553572 0.418131533498 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.29626175615 0.181151798455 164% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0644893498951 0.0850326197045 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.750717663817 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0406012257089 0.157042692854 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.219538208154 0.228904883108 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137659946572 0.108899403657 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.213085419892 0.367819155151 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0 0.0812612215331 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296106794774 0.316326947829 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121082079941 0.0921553760075 131% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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