The provided bar chart illustrates information about people who commute by plane in New York during the period from 1995 to 2000
It is evident that the amount of the travellers using in LaGuardia and Newark clearly increased between 1995 and 2000, while the quanity of people who use Kennedy airport dropped at same time. The highest quanity of LaGuardia airport was used by people in 2000
Closer inspection of the diagram show the figure for LaGuardia peaked at 35 million respectively. At the same time, the quannity of people who commute by plane in Kennedy an Newark was 25 and 15 million. After 2 year, the highest quanity of Kennedy airport was used by the population when it take up 48 million. In 1997, the number of travellers who commute by plane slightly went up to 43 million, while the figure for people in Newark was 38 million. In 1999, the figure for people who commute by plane In LaGuardia and Newark definitely grew up to 50 million and 42 million respectively. By contrast, the quanity of people using plane in Kennedy airport significantly decreased . next, the figure people using LaGuarda airport sharply rose by 30 million. Whereas, the quanity of travellers using Newark remained stable, the was a growth of people using Kennedy airport in 2000
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... people who commute by plane in Kennedy an Newark was 25 and 15 million. After 2 y...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'takes'?
Suggestion: takes
...port was used by the population when it take up 48 million. In 1997, the number of t...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Kennedy airport significantly decreased . next, the figure people using LaGuarda ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Next
...nnedy airport significantly decreased . next, the figure people using LaGuarda airpo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f people using Kennedy airport in 2000
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85779816514 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56883305716 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449541284404 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3140998964 43.030603864 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.666666667 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154305814286 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802182915004 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692277388092 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146317741142 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421510760868 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.