The chart below shows the number of users who browse Yahoo! And Google in Australia on a regular day.
The line chart presents the volume of Australian internet users who visited Yahoo! and Google on a normal day. The data is collated from 06.00 AM to 12:00 AM.
Overall, both Yahoo and Google exhibit a varied movement throughout the period. Also, Yahoo attracts the greatest number of users at noon while Google has the summit by 6:00 PM. It is also noticeable that both of them only had the fewest number of viewers by 6:00 AM to 03:00 PM.
Google records 30 million users at 06:00 AM. It slightly increased by 10 million people three hours later. A minimal decrease in the volume of Google users is noted with the same figure as its origin by 03:00 PM before having a dramatic rise which peaks at about 92 million by 06:00 PM. From that point, the number of Google subscribes gradually drop to over 50 million by midnight.
In terms of Yahoo, only 20 million Aussie web surfers are reported at 06:00 AM which is 10 million people less than Google’s figure. This goes up to almost 30 million by 09:00 AM. From this time until noon, there is a constant increase in the number of visitors until it peaks at 90 million by midday. However, it abated after three hours to 30 million, but doubled its figures by 06:00 PM. Merely 40 million Yahoo users are reported which is less than about 10 million compared to Google by the end of the study.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...alian internet users who visited Yahoo! and Google on a normal day. The data is col...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51836734694 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18237993349 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538775510204 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8504977398 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176571286584 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810069115115 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857162425906 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139405507619 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507203140711 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...alian internet users who visited Yahoo! and Google on a normal day. The data is col...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 245.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51836734694 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18237993349 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538775510204 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8504977398 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0714285714 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176571286584 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810069115115 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857162425906 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139405507619 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507203140711 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.