The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Overall, it is clear that a higher proportion of women than men did regular physical activity in every age group except from 15 to 24.
The highest rate can be found in the female group aged 45 to 54 at 53.3%, over 10% higher than the number of the same-aged male group. The similar pattern can be found in the age group of 25 to 34, 35 to 44 and 55 to 64. In each case, with an average of around 52% of female and 43% of male engaged in daily exercise. The one difference being the group aged 65 and over, where the figure of women was only 0.4% higher than men (47.1% and 46.7% respectively).
The age group from 15 to 24, however, shows a different pattern. it is notable that this is the only period when men outperformed women with 52.8% of men engaged in daily exercise. A figure which was 5.1% higher than that of female.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...24, however, shows a different pattern. it is notable that this is the only period...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23125 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19529859871 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3904344506 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.625 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277301934504 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123217037783 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098452390061 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219926182715 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065919723473 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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