The bar chart below illustrates the amount of families that owned and leased houses in England and Wales during 93 years period. The X axis describes information about years, where the Y axis shows information about the percentage of households.
The percentage of households renting accommodations reached its highest level in 1918 throughout a 93-year-period, in about 77 percent. After that, it decreased to 68 percent in 1939 and maintained its level in 1953. it then continued to decrease from 1961 to 2001, to 59 percent, 50 percent, 40 percent, 33 percent, 32 percent, respectively. In 2011, there was a slight increase to 38 percent.
In 1918, the amount of households that owned accommodations is 22 percent. It was the lowest during 1918-2011. 21 years later, in 1939, it started to rise to 32 percent, and maintained its level in 1953. After that, it continued its increase from 1961 until 2001, to 41 percent, 50 percent, 60 percent, 68 percent, and 69 percent, respectively. It then decreased slightly to 64 percent in 2011.
Overall, in 93 years, the trends of families owning accommodation and renting accommodation are the opposite. The amount of households in owned accommodation tended to increase, where the proportion of households in rented accommodation tended to decrease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... about the percentage of households. The percentage of households renting accomm...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... 1939 and maintained its level in 1953. it then continued to decrease from 1961 to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18015744273 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480952380952 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1867280911 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2307692308 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.307692307692 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252920696862 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114271510068 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100154368005 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172832718902 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781476085343 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.