The provided bar chart illustrates the proportion of residents in own and rental residences in United Kingdom and waves from 1980 to 2000.
Overall ,it is interesting to note that the households in rented houses experience downward trend while,households in owned residents followed upward trends.
Looking at the chart in 1918, about 78% of households were in living rented was raised then it remained similar between 1939 to 1953where as ,there was decrease with 10% in 1961 while, the percentage of households in rented houses was 50 percent then it dropped with 10% more over the period of 10 years more ever, from 1991 to till 2001 it remained equal with near by 30% respectively while it reached about 35% in final year.
Moving further, in 1918 around 22% households in owned accommodation then it labelled between 1939 to 1953whereas ,it rose and touched 60% from 1961 1981 again it showed similar percentage around 65% over the period of 10 years further ,it fell with 5% in end of the given period.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems 73
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- IELTS Task 1 - Tables give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 61
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 67
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed Kingdom and waves from 1980 to 2000. Overall ,it is interesting to note that...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... waves from 1980 to 2000. Overall ,it is interesting to note that the house...
^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , households
...d houses experience downward trend while,households in owned residents followed upward tren...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt in 1918, about 78% of households were in living rented was raised then it rema...
^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ned similar between 1939 to 1953where as ,there was decrease with 10% in 1961 whil...
^^
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...991 to till 2001 it remained equal with near by 30% respectively while it reached about...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it reached about 35% in final year. Moving further, in 1918 around 22% hous...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in final year. Moving further, in 1918 around 22% households in owned a...
^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... it labelled between 1939 to 1953whereas ,it rose and touched 60% from 1961 1981 a...
^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... 65% over the period of 10 years further ,it fell with 5% in end of the given peri...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94186046512 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67641482628 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.010775362 43.030603864 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.5 112.824112599 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 22.9334400587 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162773333668 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960643492873 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261943547743 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960643492873 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261943547743 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.2329268293 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.