It is generally acknowledged that traffic jam matter of concern which is going to upward train day by day due to the several use regions. Some masses claim that one of those causes is that the number of cars has increased dramatically across the world so this essay will highlight some solutions before reaching a region conclusion in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, increasing the number of population please a phenomenal role in considerable issues which include traffic jam and pollution. With the introduction of Technology everyone wants to be advance in his or her life and fulfill basic needs including purchasing on car. According to a recent report, for instance, around three quarters of total population have their own cars all over the United State which are used for daily tasks such as going to school and work instead of those transports which are provided by government. Therefore, rising traffic jam is a common problem which may be cause of Lethal circumstances such as pollution.
Moving further, for reducing traffic jam problems there are numerous measures which can be taken by the government and ownself, one of them, for example, has already imposed by the government of Delhi which was taken from 2 years back, is based on the serial number of cars and other private transports. This survey which has done recently shows that around one second of total problems including traffic jam and population has dropped rapidly but it should be done on large scale in the future.
To conclude, I strongly suggest that it should be the priority of all government that they should increase individuals in order to use government transport instead of own. Since the popularity of government transportation is decreasing day by day it should be the responsibility of every government to consider about this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07260726073 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79890948059 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0024999461 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.7 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177429767752 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716795739635 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341110431696 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109104575448 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327663287929 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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