The chart below shows the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000
The pie chart provide information about sectors that have been important to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000
Overall, the data indicate how the agriculture had a high role to the economy's development of India, whereas the Healthcare and Education became the most important sector in Turkey.
Firstl, as the first chart shows, the agriculture's sector had the highest percentage of contribution with 24% in India and the goverment sector is half of the agriculture where as,the construction is 3% which was the lowest in india.The healthcare education is same as leisure and hospital and it is 17% and the finance and other is 5% in india. the manufacturing was 8% third last lowest in india
Notably,in Turkey the highest contribution 17% by healthcare and education.However, the financ was lowest about 8% .The agriculture and hospitality is same as 14%.whereas the transportation is the second most for contributing and it was 16%.the construction is 10% which was high than the india,however the government is slightly low than the india
- Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise pollution and airport construction One reason for this is the growth in low cost passenger flights often to holiday destination Some people say that government should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it 47
- The chart below shows the percentage of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18128654971 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2199023712 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 22.4926829268 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.129430199 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 295.333333333 112.824112599 262% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 22.9334400587 249% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 5.23603664747 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307340866759 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218031595542 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769118300715 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208786302161 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827366780143 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.2329268293 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 61.2550243902 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.06136585366 129% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.9970731707 226% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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