The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

The vertical graph depicts the volume of men and women educator's in distinct kind of educational institutions in UK over the given period.

The most striking feature to be observed is that enormous proportion of females could be seen at school level where as more male tutors were engaged in higher educational institutions.

It can be vividly seen that for male teachers , University led with approximately 95% whereas private training institute, college and secondary school occupied second, third and fourth position with 55, 50 and 45% respectively. Moreover, primary, nursery/ preschool were accounted for 5 and 10% respectively. For women educators, Nursery/ preschool has highest around 95% followed by primary school,secondary school college and private institution with 80, 55, 50 and 45% respectively.

Turning to rest of description, universities stood at lowest position with nearly 25%. As far as comparisons are concerned, the proportion of female tutors was 17 times more as compared to men in Nursery/ pre school. Furthermore, in university,the volume of men teaches put the women educators at the back seat.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, second, so, third, whereas, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51149425287 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20212174557 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2897999083 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0948267978146 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408708636494 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391329258169 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676777945141 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033211676647 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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