Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. what is the reason for this? is it a negative or positive development?
In parallel to advancement in technology and hiking popularity of electronic apparatus, the trend of playing computer games is on the elevation among juveniles instead of a participating in sports activities. Here, I would like to account for reasons and mention this trend has more drawbacks than benefits.
There are manifold reasons behind this Trend. First and foremost, urbanization and modernization are the major reasons behind this phenomenon. To make it clear, the trend of migrating to cities is gaining ground swiftly along with increment in population. Therefore, the place of parks and stadiums is now using for constructing residential units or commercial units. Needless to say, adolescents are compelled to play electronic games then sports. Moreover, in this contemporary Epoch, both the genders are involved in doing white collar job. So, they are unable to dovote quality time with their offsprings and allowed them to play digital games. Consequently, children spend most of time by playing digital games than performing outdoor activities.
Multifarious demerits can be mentioned behind this trend. Initially, health standard of juveniles is decreasing day by day on account of playing computer games. To demonstrate, children are becoming the victim of several health ailments such as weak eyesight, headache, obesity, backpain and so as they spend most of time on electronic gizmos in order to play computer games. Furthermore, playing computer games makes them agressive and rude as digital games are based on the concept of shooting, killing and fighting. It is apparently seen that these games act as stumbling block in the development of toddlers.
To recapitulat, undeniably, the role of playing computer games is terrific to sharpen the intellectual skills of children. However, this trend is inviting more negative outcomes than positives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52430555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97320977558 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4991150528 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5882352941 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383651892864 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10845728191 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710775288414 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228708680865 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176164301966 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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