The information about the proportion of water used for several sectors in six parts of the world is depicted by the rendered pie charts. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with, the half of the percentage of water usage for Commercial use in North America and Europe, it accounted for 48% and 53% respectively. Moreover, in South America, 71% of the water used for Farming use. However, 39% and 32% of the water consumption for this sector in North America and Europe. The water utilization for Communal is around 15% in North America, South America and Europe.
Moving towards, for Domestic purpose the utilize of water in Central Asia and South East Asia is same, which is 7%. The most percentage of water used for Agriculture is shown in Africa, Central Asia and South Asia, it comprised to 84%, 88% and 81% correspondingly. In these three parts of the world the less use of water for Industrial and Domestic category.
To sum up, it can be vividly manifested that the high figure of water utility for Agriculture in most areas around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... Moving towards, for Domestic purpose the utilize of water in Central Asia and South East...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79032258065 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65692049188 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521505376344 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.127782902 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243136474004 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110446180532 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545149633198 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15206009148 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197498994005 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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