The bar graph provides complete information about the population of four countries named india, china, USA and japan from the year 1950 to 2000 with the prediction of 2050.
Overall, it is clear lt seen from the graph that at the beginning of the period china was leading in population, but it is predicted that in future India will be highest in the population.
In 1950, china accounted for more than 25% of the total world population, but in the year 2000 it decreased by 3%, and it is predicted that chinas population will decrease in 2050. Secondly, India contributed 15% to the total world population, the number increased in the year 2000 to about 18%, but it is predicted that number will rose up to 22% in 2050.
In 1950, USAs population was 10% of the total word's population, which was decreased to 7% in the year 2000 and it is expected that there will be no change in this figure till 2050. Additionally, Japan's population was 5% of the total world population in 1950, which dropped to 4% in the 20th century, and it is predicted that it will go down to 2.5% at the end of 2050.
- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society 89
- The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in four countries in 1950 and 2002 and projections for 2050 73
- Some people say that art subjects such as music drama and creative writing are an essential part of education and every school should include them in its syllabus Do you agree or disagree with this statement 79
- Most high level jobs are done by men Should governments encourage that a certain percentage of these jobs be reserved for women What is your opinion 55
- Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents Others however believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'chinas'' or 'china's'?
Suggestion: chinas'; china's
...creased by 3%, and it is predicted that chinas population will decrease in 2050. Secon...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'rise'
Suggestion: rise
...%, but it is predicted that number will rose up to 22% in 2050. In 1950, USAs pop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56834577111 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 5.79271573233 43.030603864 13% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 150.0 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3333333333 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186907666221 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113568114218 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670083150833 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130255559509 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784143875464 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.