The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of India and turkey in 2000.
The pie charts depict how eight different industrial sectors contributed to India and Turkish economy percentage-wise in the year 2000.
Overall, at the beginning of the second millennium, Indian economy got the highest contribution from agriculture and the lowest from the construction sector. whereas, in Turkish, Heath care and Education share more to turkey's economy and least was spent by finance.
Firstly, agriculture was observed highest contributor to the economy of India which comprised almost a quarter(24%).other distribution from Government and Trade sectors have an only 2% which was 12% and 14% respectively. The construction, manufacturing and finance share towards Indian economy were below 10 per cent that accounted for 3%, 8% and 5%. Interestingly, the spending on finance, health and education had an equal percentage that was 17%.
In contrast, In Turkey, the health and education sector contributed the highest ratio that was 17%. The agriculture sector had 14% more compare to India comprised 10%. Manufacturing, Trade, utilities and transportation which were lowest in India had a higher proportion of share for Turkish's economy. which was accounted for 12% and 16% respectively.where as, Government, leisure and hospitality had the lowest proportion for Turkish economy compare to India that was 9% and 18%.Finance was the only sector shown least proportion in both the country.However, only 2 % higher than India.
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- The chart below shows the percentages of industry sectors contribution to the economy of India and Turkey in 2000 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, whereas, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 3.97073170732 403% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58447488584 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32673555028 2.65546596893 125% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1539859698 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30180874896 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130031190052 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108598981729 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222638598438 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125505342238 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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