In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are commiting more crimes.
Why is this happening ?how should children or teenagers be punished?
It is undoubtedly that juvenile crime increased significantly in various countries .more delinquency is caused by lack of correct guidance from parents and online influence by peer .
To start with,the growth of violence commited by youngsters comes from various reasons.one of the most reason is that lack of correct guidance from parents. In this modern world busy parents have fewer time to look after their kids. Consequently, these vulnerable Teenagers find other source of care and utilize online influence by peer. Moreover, social media is widely play a large role in this issue. For example,. Nowadays teenagers contain drugs or harrassment via tv, internet or google.
After realising a situation of juvenile crimes, parents should be taken a softer punishments as soon as possible. parents should be more careful while infront of their child therefore they don't learn about bad thing. Parents need to punished their child by pampering themselves. If the teenagers clearly show change in attitude then parents keep a track of what's child is doing.
In conclusion, a frequent exposure to violence in the media and parental ignorance are rising trend of delinquency. The parents should carry out punishments according to their children's behaviour.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: .
...eased significantly in various countries .more delinquency is caused by lack of co...
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...rom parents and online influence by peer . To start with,the growth of violence c...
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Suggestion: , the
...nline influence by peer . To start with,the growth of violence commited by youngste...
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Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...with,the growth of violence commited by youngsters comes from various reasons.one of the m...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
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... a large role in this issue. For example,. Nowadays teenagers contain drugs or har...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...softer punishments as soon as possible. parents should be more careful while infront of...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e infront of their child therefore they dont learn about bad thing. Parents need to ...
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Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed their child by pampering themselves. If the teenagers clearly show change in at...
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Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...n attitude then parents keep a track of whats child is doing. In conclusion, a fre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40609137056 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79037090341 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664974619289 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1031319442 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20154906772 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624433605355 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044121587902 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104578926707 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302219385481 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eased significantly in various countries .more delinquency is caused by lack of co...
^^
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rom parents and online influence by peer . To start with,the growth of violence c...
^^
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...nline influence by peer . To start with,the growth of violence commited by youngste...
^^^^
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...with,the growth of violence commited by youngsters comes from various reasons.one of the m...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 371, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
... peer. Moreover, social media is widely play a large role in this issue. For example...
^^^^
Line 2, column 415, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... a large role in this issue. For example,. Nowadays teenagers contain drugs or har...
^^
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...softer punishments as soon as possible. parents should be more careful while infront of...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e infront of their child therefore they dont learn about bad thing. Parents need to ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed their child by pampering themselves. If the teenagers clearly show change in at...
^^
Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...n attitude then parents keep a track of whats child is doing. In conclusion, a fre...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40609137056 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79037090341 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664974619289 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1031319442 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20154906772 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624433605355 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044121587902 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104578926707 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302219385481 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.