The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the information about the kinds of leisure activity engaged in by three distinct groups in Australia.
In overall, it is noticeable that cinema sector is the most popular activity in Australia among the natives and the English-speaking nations migrants.While new migrants born from other countries much more prefer visit to library. Additionally, the interesting point is that the theatre is the least popular activity among three segment of social class living in Australia.
To begin with, the proportion of cinema visited by Australian natives and citizens from English-speaking nations is 70% and 65% respectively. Moreover, the second and third popular places belong to zoo and library with around 40% Australians native like to choose these two places as interest destinations and over 40% for whom were born in English-speaking countries. Whereas theatre receives attention of only over 20% of these two types of social class.
Regarding the new migrants from others countries, over a half of them would like to the library and cinema. On the opposite site, the theatre is the least popular for all concerned, with only 10% attending to see a play.
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| 2019-11-10 | Sagar Gurung | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...d the English-speaking nations migrants.While new migrants born from other countries ...
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Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d the English-speaking nations migrants.While new migrants born from other countries ...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'segment' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'segments'.
Suggestion: segments
... the least popular activity among three segment of social class living in Australia. ...
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Line 9, column 370, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ere born in English-speaking countries. Whereas theatre receives attention of only over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, regarding, second, so, third, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34736842105 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01953473696 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589473684211 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5566279624 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.05539334594 0.215688989381 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243259924745 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222149475892 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0356645061474 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236531693828 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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