The bar chart illustrates the statistical information of inhabitants of Canada visiting various places.
Overall it indicates that the proportion of people visiting theater is least than the people visiting other places such as cinema, library and zoo. And there is significantly increased number of people visiting cinema, who are specifically born in Canada.
Firstly, the percentage of new immigrants born in other countries visiting to theaters is least, that is about 10%. While these people visit library more frequently, that is approximately 55%. Secondly the number of new migrants born in english speaking countries going to cinema is more than the theaters, approximately 65% and 25% respectively. And 50% of these people are visiting to zoos.
Lastly, inhabitants of Canada who were born there are visiting cinemas more frequently than theaters, that is about 70 percent. While the number of these people visiting library and zoo is approximately 37% and 43% respectively.
- The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 67
- The chart below gives information on the percentages of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49673202614 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9980699218 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.691023771 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4444444444 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173799631232 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920092599934 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527291281472 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132012545161 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444961434805 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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