The information about the percentage of people, who are visited the distinct places such as cinema,theatre, library and zoo in Canada is depicted by the rendered bar graph. The data has been calibrated in percentage.
To begin with,cinema is the tops of the list in given bar graph. The highest proportion of people, who born in Canada are mostly visited cinema, it accounted for 70%, whereas they are less visited theatre, which approximately 20%. Library and Zoo are almost similar popular between canadian people, which makes up approximately 40%. Referring to new migrant, who born in other countries are mostly visited library and cinema are approximately 50% in Canada. Nevertheless, theatre has been least visited by new migrants born in other Nations, it comprised to only 10%. Subsequently, zoo is almost 35% visited in Canada by new migrants born in other countries.
Moving further, new migrants born in English speaking countries are predominantly visited cinema,it accounted for 65% and after that zoo,library and theatre are respectively 50%,40% and 25% visited in Canada.
Overall, it can be vividly manifested that theatre is the least visited place by all three category of people in Canada.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31088082902 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93104004262 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528497409326 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8898736687 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139861473488 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625422193911 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447132895965 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103561860923 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256019258987 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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