The information about the people,who explore to and from the UK between 1979 and 1999 and other chart shows well-known Nations visited by UK dwellers in 1999 is depicted by the rendered line and bar graph.The data has been calibrated in millions.
To begin with line graph,In 1979 around 10 million overseas residence was visited the UK.In the next seven years period,a slight increase was observed and reached at approximately 13 millions and then considerably increased between 1986 and 1999 and stood at 18 millions.However, a moderate escalate was manifested who visit abroad by UK dwellers from 1979 to 1984,it accounted for 20 millions.There had been a dramatic rose was seen until 1999 and reached all time high around 53 millions.
Moving further,referring to bar graph,France was tops the list in most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999,it comprised to 11 millions.Spain,USA ann Greece was respectively 9 millions,4 millions and 3 millions people visited in 1999.Whereas,Turkey was the least visited country by UK dwellers, which makes up 2 millions.
Overall,it can be vividly manifested that native people of the UK was highly visited abroad,especially France.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, well, whereas, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39572192513 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44819866968 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641711229947 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.996376764 43.030603864 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 252.25 112.824112599 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.75 22.9334400587 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442359935792 0.215688989381 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.275090308902 0.103423049105 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124821215729 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275090308902 0.15604864568 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124821215729 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.2329268293 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.