The following chart illustrates, in percentages, how much different parts of the world have contributed to the world’s oil production and consumption.
Overall, the most prominent bar on the chart is one showing the Middle East has the most significant share in the world’s total oil resources. However, the highest consumption is made in Asia. Australia and New Zealand have produced the least amount of oil; meanwhile, their utilization is also the lowermost.
Considering the production, 56.25% of the global oil resources are in the Middle East, which is the highest figure on the chart, whereas Australia and New Zealand have only 0.30%. Although Canada is at 2nd in oil possession, its production is only 14.84%, which is far less than the Middle East. Central and South America, Eastern Europe, and other areas of the world holds less than 10% of the total reserves.
Looking at the oil expenditure, Australia and New Zealand have spent 1.31%, which in contrast to others, is the lowest proportion on the chart. However, in Asia, 26.21% of oil utilization is observed. The consumption of 25.48% is also noticed in the United States. Meanwhile, oil expenditure is qualified under 10% in other regions except for Western Europe, which spent 19.24% of the world’s total oil resources.
- The chart below shows the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wh 73
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, whereas, while, except for, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1102.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22274881517 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88417344464 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521327014218 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0326516134 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.181818182 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151723278113 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05692713124 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479314896257 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105889446958 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332136437415 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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