The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart illustrates the outcomes of the survey on the residents’ coffee and tea purchasing and consuming frequency in five different Australian cities. As can be seen from the bar chart, the percentages of people going to a coffee store or tea in the last 4 weeks are the highest in all surveyed cities, except for that in Adelaide. Moreover, Melbourne has by far the biggest percentages of coffee and tea consumption.

In particular, the figure for people getting to the coffee shop in a 4-week period accounts for over 60% in Sydney, which is about 15% and 17% higher than that of people buying instant coffee and fresh coffee respectively. The same gap happens in Melbourne, in which approximately 65% of people go to the cafe for usual purchases in the last 4 weeks while only nearly 50% and just over 40% get fresh or instant coffee in sequence. This is also the highest recorded figure in the survey. The trend between the surveyed categories in Brisbane and Hobart is nearly the same, albeit with a smaller difference between the percentages.

By contrast, Adelaide experiences a different trend in the habit of people where a half of the citizens get instant coffee in the last month, which is higher than that of the other two categories.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, except for, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8064516129 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72853091793 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539170506912 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4160400967 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.375 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272922103724 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118648039005 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735922296984 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174952595395 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766502338145 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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