Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
In today's modern world, people have differing views about whether they are offered enough choices in their lives. From my point of view, I am of the opinion that the pervasiveness of a variety of choices in everyday lives is expressively more justifiable.
It is obvious that the better-off living standard has paved the way for numerous chances for people. As they are equipped with more services as well as state-of-the-art information and knowledge, they can determine their work and life decisions or their aspirations for anything and the like at a vantage point. For example, thanks to a more integrated lifestyle, students can either choose to study abroad or within the country, unlike the past when people did not have the facilities and financial backup. to do so. Similarly, many other fields in one individual’s lives can provide them with several paths and roads.
Moreover, one thing worth considering is the open-mindedness of people with technological know-how that has fostered them a myriad of choices. When a sense of being autonomous and the awareness of human rights have ingrained in people's mind, they can think more freely about facilitating and getting the choices and opportunities in their lives. Take women as an example, they were under oppression the opposite sex in the past that they did not fight back and almost had no a right to make a decision in their lives, they can choose their own occupation, make a living, etc by themselves with independent decisions nowadays. This can boil down to a more open mindset as well as the access to the knowledge through the Internet or schools.
In conclusion, in today's fast changing world, I am convinced that people can benefit greatly from a multitude of choices as they have better life quality as well as the adjustment in the mindset and knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... they did not fight back and almost had no a right to make a decision in their liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98045602606 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86808881167 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560260586319 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.253612033 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.416666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123588600759 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543516198048 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316602042795 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082351750131 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0051629895234 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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