the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information and by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This given bar diagram illustrates the surveying outcomes of people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities ( Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart )
Overall, it is apparent that having a massive figure went to the cafe ( over 50 percent except in Adelaide ). On the one hand, the number of those who bought instant coffee is always higher than fresh coffee.
Beginning with appearing frequently in cafes, Melbourne accounts for 63.5 percent while Hobart achieves approximately 62 percent. Furthermore, they are cities having the most rating population in indicated cities. The rest is Sydney (61 percent), Brisbane (roughly 56 percent) and the city that accomplishes the lowest proportion (49,5 percent)
About the rate of people who have bought instant and fresh coffee, Firstly, in Hobart, they are about 54 percent and 37 percent. Otherwise, considering Adelaide, people buying instant coffee is more than fresh coffee two times ( 50 and nearly 25 percent ). In the meanwhile, they are more or less 52,5 and 34,5 percent in Brisbane. In terms of Melbourne, comparing Sydney, although the instant coffee ratio is higher, the proportion of fresh coffee is not as high as Sydney
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, while, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64629355759 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6843163561 43.030603864 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140430741309 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614655418586 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655064312724 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107391876256 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105579600917 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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