The Bar chart illustrates the data of consumption of liquid beverages such as tea or coffee by the people of some major cities of Australia and whether the beverages are freshly made or instant. the data shown in the chart is of last four weeks.
Allover, the Chart depicts that moreover half of the city residents visited a café or a restaurant in last four weeks to buy a beverage which is mostly coffee whether it is freshly prepared or instantly made.
However, in all the five cities, people prefer to consume the instant coffee rather than freshly made one.
Interestingly, only in Adelaide, number of people who bought coffee, that too instant one, is slightly higher than the people who visited the café meanwhile nowhere else people seem to do that.
In Hobart, maximum number of people bought instantly made coffee that is approximately 55 percent of the city population however, in Sydney only 45 percent of residents bought instant coffee. Whereas, in Melbourne, Adelaide and Brisbane, number of residents who bought the same are in between 45 to 55 percent.
Consumption of fresh coffee is significantly lower than the instantly prepared one. In case of Sydney, large number of people chose it while in Brisbane least number of people preferred to drink the fresh one. only 35 to 45 percent of residents of all five cities preferred freshly made coffee. This is the approximate figures because the graph shows that the number of people are even slightly lesser than 35 in case of Brisbane and Adelaide and none of the city crosses 45 percent mark.
- The chart below show the people s tea or coffee buying habits in five Australian cities Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant 67
- Bar Graph 11
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- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... beverages are freshly made or instant. the data shown in the chart is of last four...
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...ly coffee whether it is freshly prepared or instantly made. However, in all the...
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... coffee rather than freshly made one. interestingly, only in Adelaide, number of people who...
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...owhere else people seem to do that. in Hobart, maximum number of people bought...
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... lower than the instantly prepared one. in case of Sydney, large number of people ...
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...eople preferred to drink the fresh one. only 35 to 45 percent of residents of all fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89887640449 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54993200054 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449438202247 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.515143093 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.909090909 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195320097755 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844513677822 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407853050589 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112103129155 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369229854756 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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