The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart describes the proportion of people consuming teas and coffees in five Australian cities four weeks ago. Overall, more than half the population in all cities went to a cafe for coffee or tea, while people bought instant coffee and fresh coffee, generally less common.
Firstly, Melbourne, Sydney, and Hobart were 3 cities that had the percentage of citizens who went to café for drinks more than 60%. It was followed by Brisbane and Adelaide respectively at 55% and 50%. Moreover, the figure for people who bought instant coffee in Brisbane and Hobart was more than 50%. In addition, the percentage of residents in Adelaide who bought instant coffee was higher than those in Melbourne by 4% in the same period. Sydney was the city with the lowest number of people that bought instant coffee at 45%.On the other hand, the figure for Fresh coffees brought by the citizens who lived in Sydney and Melbourne was taken up to more than 40% while the rest was lower than 40%
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...eople that bought instant coffee at 45%.On the other hand, the figure for Fresh co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76023391813 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.300721848 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0984276971 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183712086237 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1046977875 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986420827446 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192600799132 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104781534713 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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