The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar chart illustrates residents’ buying and drinking habits for coffee and tea in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
Overall, going to a café for coffee and tea in last 4 weeks is by far the most favored habit, with the exception of Adelaide. It is also worth noticing that buying fresh coffee ranks last in all Australian cities.
A similar pattern was witnessed in the figure for Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart. The majority of people preferred going to a café for coffee and tea to other habits, with an average of 63% from each city. Second place in this group belonged to buying instant coffee in last 4 weeks, which was chosen by 45% in Sydney and nearly a half in Hobart and in Melbourne. This is followed by buying fresh coffee, averaging approximately 40%.
Moving on to Brisbane and Adelaide, going to a cafe accounted for the largest proportion of people in Brisbane (just over 55%) whilst the most habit of Adelaide’s residents was buying instant coffee (50%). Furthermore, a similarity can be seen in the percentage of people buying fresh coffee in two cities, both around 34%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...weeks is by far the most favored habit, with the exception of Adelaide. It is also worth noticing tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84816753927 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63666501707 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570680628272 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.233709366 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.888888889 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239735082909 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10471922461 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655381499257 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16953422536 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534999645547 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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