the bar chart illustrates the percentage of consumption coffee and tea and drinking in five distinct urban of Austran from the study
overall, the proportion of customer who bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks accounted for lowest position in 5 Austrailian cities. By contrast, the firgure for people who went to a cafe for coffe or tea in last 4 weeks had opposite trend, except for Adelaide city.
Sydney and Mellbourne consumpted 40 percent of fresh coffee in last 4 weeks, while the figure for Brisban, Adelaide, Hobart was lower significantly, at nearly 35%. Citizen's Brisban and Hobart bought and drunk instant coffee more high than remaining urban with 53 percent, which was higher 3% compared to Adeide, whereas the proportion of consumption in Sydney and Mellbourne made up 43% and 48% respectively.
there was more than 62 percent the number of people's consumption who went o a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks in Sydney, Mellbourne and Hobart. While the percentage of consumption those in Brisban was approximately at 55%, this figure for Adelaide was smallest with nearly 40%.
- In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 78
- Nowadays international tourism is the biggest industry in the world Unfortunately international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures Do you agree or disagree 56
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96739130435 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79481020522 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554347826087 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8375392648 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.333333333 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0793989935205 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469053321504 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411863587628 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682193588086 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051923123859 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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