The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart illustrate the proportion of citizen’s consuming ans enjoying drink involving coffee and teas in five different countries recorded in Australia.
As can be seen from the chart, while ordering a cup of coffe or tea at the café accounts for the majority excpet Adelaide whose resident’s top priority is instant coffee, fresh one constitute for the smallest proportion similarly in five countries.
Looking at the chart for more details, what stands out is that Melbourne lead the way in terms of being the biggest consumers who place more emphasis on going to the café for a drink with approxiamately 43% lower twice than the figure recorded in Adelaide at just 29%. While the percentage of residents in Horbart and Syney prioritizing this option is lower than 1% and 2% with repectively 42% and 41%, Brisbane receive a lower number of answers to the questionaries at only about 36%.
Moving on to the instant and fresh coffee, the number of people completing the survey prefering these two kinds of drink account for roughly the second and third proportion in 4 cities apart from Adelaide which instant coffee is its citizen’s favourite drink at 30% double compared to fresh coffee about only 14%. Whereas, the figire for instant coffee of people accomodating in Brisbane constitute for a quite significant proportion at about nearly one third, fresh coffee is bought least in this city about only 14% being the lowest one. Residents in Hobart, Melbourne and Sydney roughly prioritize these kinds of drink.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, similarly, third, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05905511811 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69353782418 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3164857147 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.571428571 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.2857142857 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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