The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Overall, it is clear that going to a cafe for coffee or tea accounted for the highest proportion in Australia which means that this is the most common ways that people choose to buy and drink coffee or tea. In addition, buying fresh coffee occupied the lowest percentage in five cities that this was the unwelcome pathway to choose in Australia.
Looking more closely at the bar chart,we can see that going to a cafe for coffee or tea in last 4 weeks was the main habit for Australian, especially in Melbourne, accounting for 63% that was the highest percentage in this five cities.Hobart ranked the second position(62%) and the Sydney followed closely (61%). Moreover, choose to a cafe for coffee or tea was the most choice in Brisbane, occupying in 56%. However, in Adelaide was in an opposite situation that buying instant coffee accounted for nearly 50% which was the biggest proportion than go to a cafe for coffee or tea(49%).
Buying instant coffee was the second choice in the five cities expect Adelaide. 54% of city residents in Hobart choose this way in coffee and tea purchasing and tasting that accounted the highest proportion in Australia, and the Brisbane with 53% in secondary. Furthermore, the Melbourne and Sydney also separate possession 48% and 43%.
The percentage of city residents choose to buy fresh coffee was the lowest in five Australian cities. Sydney was the highest proportion over the other city which accounted for 44%. The second highest city was Melbourne (42%) and, followed by Hobart(37%). Besides, the Brisbane and Adelaide occupied the same percentage, which accounted for 34%.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
... Looking more closely at the bar chart,we can see that going to a cafe for coffee...
^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hobart
... highest percentage in this five cities.Hobart ranked the second position62% and the S...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, look, moreover, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98287671233 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60121395437 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441780821918 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6176052215 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241882792343 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11940322013 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145325436486 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220012796054 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184775982037 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
... Looking more closely at the bar chart,we can see that going to a cafe for coffee...
^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hobart
... highest percentage in this five cities.Hobart ranked the second position62% and the S...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, look, moreover, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 965.302439024 151% => OK
No of words: 292.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98287671233 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60121395437 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441780821918 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6176052215 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241882792343 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11940322013 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145325436486 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220012796054 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184775982037 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.