THe given figure depicts the outcome of a study on the topic of on what proportion evaluated in percentage Austrailian people habituated in consuming coffee or tea during a priod of 4 -week in 5 various cities in Australlia.
Looking from an overall perspective,it is way conspicuous that A host number of Australlian excluding Hobart's residents are mostly into heading to Cafes for the purpose of drinking coffee or tea.Moreover,The second popular habit among Australian people was stocking instant coffee and then purchasing fresh coffee was recognized as the least liked habit.It is also worthy to note that during this period tea was not purchased at all.
As can be seen from the presented bar chart ,it is apparent from the data supplied that 3 cities which are melbourne,hobart and sydney took up the largest proportion of having coffee or tea at cafes with percentage of over 60 percent.This was followed by just over 50 percent in other cities except Adelaide.
Turning to buying both instant and fresh coffee,Hobart's and brisbone's figure witnessed a high percentage at over 50 percent.Adelaide followed with almost 50 percent.Sydney and melbourne was next with over 45 percent.further,buying fresh coffee which was not a real interest of Australian people on the whole,achieved a high percentage of more than 40 percent in sydney and melbourne.Hobart's figure was next with over 35 percent.Then Adelaide and brisbone was the least concentrated area in this topic by just experiencing under 35 percent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, second, so, then, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25514403292 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40401115012 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.4926829268 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.94373681 43.030603864 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.25 112.824112599 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.75 22.9334400587 265% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125420258413 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869546141082 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320683511751 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869546141082 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320683511751 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 13.2329268293 255% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 61.2550243902 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 10.3012195122 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.12 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.9970731707 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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