THe given figure illustrates the outcome of a conducted survey on the topic related to the habit of Austraillian people's consumpution of coffee and tea in five various cities over a period of 4 weeks.
LOoking from an overall perspective,it is way notable that Austrailian residents were more into having coffe or tea at cafes except people who live in adelaide.Moreover,second favorite habit among australian was,buying instant coffee while stocking fresh coffes wasn't considered as a popular activity.It is also worthy to note that tea was not purchased at all during the 4-week period.
As can be seen from this presented figure,residents of three cities which are from Melbourne,hobart and Sydney took the lead in heading to cafes for coffee or tea at nearly 64,almost 63 and just above 60 percent respectively compared to other cities.
Taking a precise glance at this chart can provide a number of data related to buying fresh and instant coffee which latter was far more popular than former.hobart and brisbane was seen a high number of residents who bought instant coffe at almost 55 and more than 50 percent.However,clearly the number of residents who purchased fresh coffee was witnessed a high percentage of nearly 45 and over 40 in two cities of sydney and melbourne respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, moreover, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15094339623 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39288357498 2.65546596893 128% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.681428278 43.030603864 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 273.0 112.824112599 242% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 22.9334400587 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1989588013 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133437448969 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753478326647 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133437448969 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753478326647 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.3 13.2329268293 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 61.2550243902 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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