THe given line graph statistically supplies data related to how population and wealth is disturbuted in various parts of the world including china,india and other parts.
LOoking from an overall perspective,it is notable to mention that the population of each region does not really have any direct relations with the wealth of that nation.To put it more clearly,it is far way conspicuous that North America has taken up the highest segment of the world's wealth,nonetheless India with almost 3 times more percentage of residents compared to former nation, had only achieved one of the least ranks of the the wealth situation among other less popoluouse parts of the world.
As is palpably illustrated by this figure,china is considered as the most populouse city by consisting almost 25 percent of world's population.However, clearly rich Asia pacefic only accounts 5 percent of population shares of the globe.
Upon comparing how wealth is disturbuted all around the world, it is obviouse from the diagram provided that 3 varied parts of the world namely North America ,europe and Rich asia pacific is considered as wealthy parts of the world with reported percentage of almost 35,30 and just under 25 percent respectively.By strike contrast,nations such as Africa,china and other Asia pacific has received the least percentage of wealth which are nearly 1 and almost 3 percent respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , india
...rious parts of the world including china,india and other parts. LOoking from an ove...
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Suggestion: To
...elations with the wealth of that nation.To put it more clearly,it is far way consp...
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...th of that nation.To put it more clearly,it is far way conspicuous that North Ameri...
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Suggestion: worlds'; world's
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Suggestion: , nonetheless
...the highest segment of the worlds wealth,nonetheless India with almost 3 times more percenta...
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... and just under 25 percent respectively.By strike contrast,nations such as Africa,...
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Suggestion: , nations
... percent respectively.By strike contrast,nations such as Africa,china and other Asia pac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, nonetheless, really, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31081081081 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17958356448 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 22.4926829268 245% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 146.313661358 43.030603864 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 294.75 112.824112599 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.5 22.9334400587 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12365841567 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749946995457 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318739710631 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749946995457 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318739710631 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.3 13.2329268293 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.65 61.2550243902 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.7 10.3012195122 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.9970731707 218% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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