The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant

We can see from the chart the decision of analysis about peoples buying and drinking coffee and tea in five cities which are located in Australia.Overall, it is apparent that the maximum proportion of people from Hobart were interested in to go to a cafe for tea and coffee and people prefer to buy instant coffee rather than fresh coffee in all cities.To begin with Sydney and Melbourne, more than 60% of people of these cities went to café for coffee or tea. Almost 48% of citizens of Melbourne had a habit of buying instant coffee, which was about 5% more than Sydney’s people. Near about equal proportions of people of these cities liked to purchase fresh coffee amounting to 40%.Moreover, with remaining cities, 50% to 53% of people from the three cities were interested in buying instant coffee, which was about 15% more than the proportion of people who bought fresh coffee in the same cities.There is a highest number of nearly 45% in the proportion of city residents in Sydney that bought fresh coffee in last four weeks. Brisbane and Adelaide witness a lowest point of about 35%. about people bought instant coffee in last four weeks, the percentage of urban residents in Hobart stand at nearly 55%, where the highest common compared with other cities in Australian.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82727272727 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54837494809 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504545454545 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.284283283 43.030603864 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 212.4 112.824112599 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.0 22.9334400587 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254279868471 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132533859644 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726682830463 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254279868471 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.3 13.2329268293 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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