The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of individuals who visit four different popular travel destination in Britain in 1999 while the tables give information for the details of the proportion of travelers going to five areas in Theme Park.
Overall, Theme parks attracted the highest people while the least was seen in Wildlife Parks and Zoo, moreover, Blackpool Pleasure Beach dominated other places in Theme Park.
Starting with the pie chart. 38% was the percentage of visitor in Theme Parks, which was the highest and that for Museums and Galleries was nearly equal with 37%. Furthermore, while there was 16% of people going to Historic Houses and Monuments, the least figure was seen in Wildlife Parks and Zoo with 9%.
Moving to the table, it is evident that Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the most attractive places with 47%. In the meantime, the percentage for those who visit Alton Towers and Pleasureland, Southport and the others were almost equally represented at 16% and 10%, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'destination' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'destinations'.
Suggestion: destinations
...who visit four different popular travel destination in Britain in 1999 while the tables giv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14024390244 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63794751709 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567073170732 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1788945868 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131127236145 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063373340369 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523255161085 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864119185111 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557739195746 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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