The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visitedfour types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited
four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

The given chart provides information on the result of a survey conducted to find out about the number of people visiting four different types of tourist attractions and the proportion of five theme parks visited in Britain in the year 1999.
A glance at the provided chart reveals that theme parks are the most popular tourist attraction, while in the opposite, it is true to wildlife parks and zoos. BlackPool Pleasure beach by far received the highest ratio of visitors in the theme parks sector.
Looking at the information in more detail, it can be seen that 38% of visitors chose to go to theme parks, 37% of them went to museums and galleries. On the contrary, only 16% picked historic houses and monuments as their destination, wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular with just 9%.
In the theme parks sector, nearly half of the surveyed had been to blackpool pleasure beach. Alton towers was the second most popular theme park with 17%, followed by chessington with 16%. Finally, legoland, and chessington had each welcomed 10% of the surveyed visitors.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, while, it is true, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9010989011 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5270902721 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3602826167 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153857399319 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063254622811 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111256219856 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1097827617 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139988710954 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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