The chart below shows the sales of five different jams from 2009 to 2014.
The line graph depicts how many million of five different types of jam units were sold from the year 2009 to 2014.
Overall, it can be manifested that except plum jam all other types of jams were in increasing order with the highest sales in the strawberry notably, grapes jams had highest rise during the sir years of period.
Firstly, selling rate firstly the Selling rate of strawberry jam increased from the year 2009 rising from 3.5 million unit and rosed in the year 2014 to 7 million unit additional Cherry jam increased in the year 2010 and 2012 with 2.5 and 3 million unit respectively. Moreover, grape jam selling was about 0.5 million unit and it rosed up to the 4.5 million unit in the year 2009 and 2014 respectively.
Furthermore, plum jam and Raspberry jam selling started in the same year and the spelling was same (2.5 ) million unit .Raspberry jam drastically increased in Year 2014 and was slightly remained constant till the year 2014 .However, plum jam rate was declined constantly and was reached zero million unit in the year 2014
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- The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
... in the strawberry notably, grapes jams had highest rise during the sir years of period. F...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... same year and the spelling was same 2.5 million unit .Raspberry jam drastically ...
^^
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the spelling was same 2.5 million unit .Raspberry jam drastically increased in Y...
^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Raspberry
...he spelling was same 2.5 million unit .Raspberry jam drastically increased in Year 2014 ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tly remained constant till the year 2014 .However, plum jam rate was declined cons...
^^
Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...y remained constant till the year 2014 .However, plum jam rate was declined constantly ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72826086957 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43497670034 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6077315736 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.0 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 5.23603664747 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234828195744 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164376404808 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711354159583 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17650911933 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752459473218 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
... in the strawberry notably, grapes jams had highest rise during the sir years of period. F...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... same year and the spelling was same 2.5 million unit .Raspberry jam drastically ...
^^
Line 4, column 117, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... the spelling was same 2.5 million unit .Raspberry jam drastically increased in Y...
^^
Line 4, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Raspberry
...he spelling was same 2.5 million unit .Raspberry jam drastically increased in Year 2014 ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tly remained constant till the year 2014 .However, plum jam rate was declined cons...
^^
Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...y remained constant till the year 2014 .However, plum jam rate was declined constantly ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72826086957 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43497670034 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.6077315736 43.030603864 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.0 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 22.9334400587 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 5.23603664747 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234828195744 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164376404808 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711354159583 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17650911933 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752459473218 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.2329268293 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.32 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.