The chart below shows the total amount of sales in a bookshop form 2006 to 2010

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The chart below shows the total amount of sales in a bookshop form 2006 to 2010.

The infographic indicates the profit a bookstore gained by selling various types of fiction publications between 2006 and 2010.
Overall, romantic books predominated the sales while the mystery genre became the second most profiting type. Nevertheless, the remaining types of books include young adults, classics, and sci-fi disproportionately hold modest positions.
As mentioned above, the romance types received the highest position in every year. In 2006, this genre made a huge profit of approximately 80,000 dollars and by 2007, reaching its peak at roughly 118 thousands dollar. Nevertheless, romantics earnings witnessed a appriciable fall in the next year and thereafter gradually rose again. Intriguingly, the trend happened to the mystery sale share some features with the romance one, increased by 20,000 dollars from 2006 to 2007 and peaked at this year, however, plummeted dramatically in 2008, continued to decrease slightly in 2009 and showed a marginal climb in the next year. Similarity occurred to the fantasy gross earnings, 2007 witnessed its peak at 10,000 dollar while 2009 became the lowest profiting year of this genre, merely half of the 2007 sales.
Moreover, the graph experienced some state of flux in other types earnings. Young adults profit stayed above 20,000 dollar in most years excpect for 2008, hitted the bottom at about 19 thousands dollar.While 2010 witnessed the lowest profit of classic book at 10,000 dollars and other years showed a fluctuation in this genre gross earnings, these changes varied considerably during the majority of mentioned time.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ertheless, romantics earnings witnessed a appriciable fall in the next year and t...
^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...the bottom at about 19 thousands dollar.While 2010 witnessed the lowest profit of cla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81191822958 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.684466898 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.3 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745348710033 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310842546071 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357707339727 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054589448152 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258801052566 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ertheless, romantics earnings witnessed a appriciable fall in the next year and t...
^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...the bottom at about 19 thousands dollar.While 2010 witnessed the lowest profit of cla...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81191822958 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.684466898 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.3 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0745348710033 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310842546071 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357707339727 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054589448152 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258801052566 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.