The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The illustrated diagram indicates the process of exploiting underground heat in order to produce electric energy.
The progress contains 5 main stages, starting from pumping down low temperature water and end with the generator machine.
The first step of getting geothermal heat is leading water, which was stored before in cold situation so as to cool down its heat, through a 4.5-kilometer-long tunnel down into the ground. So that the cold water will meet the injection well in stage 2. The second step will be processed once the previous water continue its way underground where is full of hot rocks and therefore be called as geothermal zone. Thereafter, the water will gain a boiling temperature from the geothermal zone, meet the standards and be pumped up at the production well to a container labelled condenser.
The forth step begins right after the hot water is lead to the condenser, thus the sweltering steam will be used for the end of geothermal power plant. It is the turbine that will be powered by the mentioned steam and will swing swiftly, resulting in moving the energy into the generator. In the generator, the heat energy will be transformed in another type of energy, the electricity. Henceforth the electricity power are ready to be distributed to others requiring places and phases.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r and end with the generator machine. The first step of getting geothermal heat i...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ich was stored before in cold situation so as to cool down its heat, through a 4.5-kilom...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...meter-long tunnel down into the ground. So that the cold water will meet the injection ...
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Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... geothermal zone, meet the standards and be pumped up at the production well to a...
^^
Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Henceforth,
...nother type of energy, the electricity. Henceforth the electricity power are ready to be d...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03669724771 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86067933165 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6263566302 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0920449542022 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408971789168 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293972500237 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646369928328 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330450903622 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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